Critique of My - Biography Assignment

Bradley Best:

• In the first paragraph, I would swap the word "expertise" for skills. Similarly, in the technical skills section, using the word "proficient" might detract more than it amplifies.

• There might be more skills and tools you could mention than you did. Unfortunately, our industry can be keyword-centric, so you want to be sure to use as many as you can while maintaining readability. (The project outline accomplishes some of this, but it's a little out of place here.)

• I'm actually not sure what this sentence means: "I am excited about the opportunity to bring my skills, enthusiasm, and commitment to staying up to date with industry trends to the Web design and Development industry."

Renu Gopinatha Pillai:

• Good introduction.
• Mention some notable project and skills
• Good flow of information.
• Concise.
• Clear idea of how to do the capstone project.

Josmi Jose:

• Explained technical skill clearly.
• Have good concept of what to be done in Capstone.
• Can be louder.

Priya Menezes:

• You have a nice bio, though your presentation lacked passion and was a little unclear

Meet Patel:

• Aran is really good at making websites that look great and work well.
• Aran is good at explaining things, making it easy for others to understand.
• Aran has made some cool websites, showing he knows how to make sites that people can use easily.
• Aran wants to keep learning and help make the internet better in the future.

My critique of other student’s biography

Meet:

• You bring a strong computer engineering background to your current post-graduation web development studies at North Island College. Your proficiency in HTML, CSS, JavaScript, ReactJs, NodeJs, Tailwind, Bootstrap, and Java showcases a diverse skill set. Notable projects, like the photographer's portfolio and design system, demonstrate your practical expertise in front-end and back-end technologies. Your future goals include helping small businesses online, enhancing your cybersecurity knowledge, and staying updated on advanced web development. Your capstone project focuses on creating an interactive e-commerce site, showcasing your commitment to user-friendly design and enhancing the online shopping experience.

Josmi:

• Your educational background, work experiences, and willingness to learn React.js by yourself show that you're skilled or experienced in design and development. Your projects, like a hair salon website and a food recipe app, highlight your abilities. Working in different companies proves you can handle complex tasks. As you want to be a full-stack engineer? Your upcoming project on inventory management fits well with your goals. In short, your dedication to learning and solving problems makes you stand out in the digital design and development field.

Renu

• You've got an excellent mix of learning and hands-on experience in web development, building things like a weather app and a real estate site. You aim to be great at making websites look excellent and work well. You love to help others online and want to create a ride-sharing app to solve transportation issues in your local area, which is fantastic!

Priya Menezes

• You've excelled as a UX strategist and designer, with your tech journey starting post-high school and gaining recognition for an outstanding AI paper. Your deliberate return to academia after five successful years in the professional world is truly commendable. Notable projects, like the "Project Abundance Bookmarking Tool," showcase your exceptional web design skills. Accolades earned at Accenture and Servify speak to your leadership. Now, your capstone project envisions a future where web design is not just a job but your exceptional home—a space to contribute, learn, and thrive.